Burning Question

by Redd   May 18, 2008


I see her out of the corner of my eye
My heart begins to race

She looks at me
A smile forms on my face

She is so new to me
But the comfort she instills is undeniable

She is so beautiful
So independent and extraordinary

My focus turns to her
Every moment she is near

The ground seems to disappear
At the sound of her voice

It seems so right to talk to her
She always says the right things

I always smile
Even though I feel like I'm about to blow it

Sensations flare
My mind races

All because of one question
"Is she the one for me?"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Iris

    This is so sweet! sorry i hadnt commented on it before. cant believed i missed it! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ADreamToMyNightmare

    That is how i once felt and you captured the feeling so well.. my case was slightly different, but yet it is so alike.
    i guess guys and girls aren't too different.
    liked it :D keep it up