This is an absolutely BEAUTIFUL piece of poetry! people on this site should write love poems more like this.

Take a mixture of commitment and care.
A few teaspoons of passion; three of four,
Stir with your knowledge and faith,
And for my broken heart you hold the cure.
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i liked this stanza the best. it's absolutely magnificent.

i found this piece immensely pleasant to read. a change from the dark poems that i usually would.
nice rhyme and flow in here, also

5/5

Keep Writing, lovely
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Beautifully written and electrifying piece. :) I loved every word you used. You did an amazing job. 5/5