Comments : My Hearts Goodbye

  • 16 years ago

    by tears of steal

    Aww this is good i dont know why but it kinda reminded me of romeo and juliet. its very good you should defintly keep writing!!

    *annak*

  • Wow that was amazing

  • 15 years ago

    by Fanny

    Thats very sweet! My fav line was "When forever comes together we will die" that was beutiful. keep writing.