When you walk away...

by Emily   May 18, 2008


When your around, i feel happy.
when you talk, i could listen forever.
when you walk up to me, my heart gets excited.
then you walk away...

when your not around, i feel lost.
when your not talking, i wish you was.
when you walk away from me, i want you to come back.
then you do...

when you walk back up to me, i feel relieved.
when you stay and talk to me, i don't ever want you to stop.
when you hug me, i don't want to let go.
then i do...

when i let go of you, it's back to normal.
when i let go of you, i want you back.
when i let go of you, i wish i hadn't.
then you walk away...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jess

    I like the repetition and sadness esp in the last lines of each but the second stanza. the dot dot dots' say almost more than words can in this case x