The Vampire

by A Phoenyx in Flight   May 18, 2008


She was the queen of night.
Her dark Brown hair blended with her surroundings.
As she stalked her prey.

The young girl didn't have a clue.
That she was about to be her next meal.
She was the next victim of the Vampire.

The Vampire pounced on the girl.
The girl let out a horrid scream.
But it was too late for her to be saved.

The vampire's teeth sunk in her neck.
The sweet taste of blood filled her mouth.
She wanted more.

She drank till there was none left.
She was sad it was all gone.
So she went out to hunt more.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Awesome!!..I'm really a big fan of Vampires..may be I'm one:p...Really a very nice poem,good job:)..keep it up..

  • 16 years ago

    by Jo

    Its good...its short but it tells a story which is great...

  • 16 years ago

    by Kiss My Sass

    It is a good story line but it could have been better. It needs more subtle wording and more seduction. That is what a vampire is all about.. Subtleness and Seduction

  • 16 years ago

    by Four Letter Lie

    Great poem, its very visual.

    the short sentences add an amzing effect.

    great job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by XxXMissSweetPeaXxX

    Haha i like it..and i would hate to have been that girl..lol..but its good

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