A very beautiful poem. You used great words and the rhyming was good, i felt like i was the one experiencing it. keep up the good work!
my fav part was

as i fall asleep upon ur chest...
waiting to wake up....just to see your face....and know it was real...

i love that part, its like u want to wake up but you don't because you don't want to be disappointed if it wasn't real.
5/5

This is very lovely. lol excellently written. you have a good want. i think someone could do that for you just gotta find the right person lol.