Ocean View.

by Courageous Dreamer   May 18, 2008


As I look out the window,
I see the flawless outlook of the ocean.
Extending various miles in both directions,
Portraying such a ravishing image that could never possibly vanish.

The numerous lights that glow in the midnight air,
Is just a spec of what I can perceive.
The stars in the sky radiate brightly throughout the whole sky,
And reflect like a mirror's image upon the glistening ocean.

The sun descends slowly beneath the clouds,
As a diversity of colors loom.
Crimson, indigo, and violet fuse and collate within the stars
To exhibit the ocean's view.

The many waves that shape the ocean are spiritless,
They have hardly any disturbance among them.

As I start to shut my eyes,
I see a painted picture in my mind.
It's of the ocean view in the city,
that I can see perfectly out my back window.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Aaahhhh.... I just wanna start from the beginning.... Lol,you started amazing...and got even more amazing..I was expecting..I'm like...mehhh certainly she too started somewhere between dreams and fears...bla bla... but I was Wrong... omg omg... <3

    the ending,that ending temps!! sheesh

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Once again another nicely written poem. The wording was great and painted a picture in my mind. The flow was great from beginning to end. It was also a good length and was easy to understand.

    I gave it a 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nice write Temps, I can see how you've evolved as a writter. This was good, but not as good as your latest works. I always like to read one of the first writes of a poet, goes to show how much they've learn through their time writing. Well done, keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Thought i would read one of your first, not bad at all, one or two mistakes to my mind, but otherwise a pleasant poem and a nice read.

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "The sun descends slowly beneath the clouds,
    As a diversity of colors loom.
    Crimson, indigo, and violet fuse and collate within the stars
    To exhibit the ocean's view."

    ^Wow, I love the imagery you have depicted here, I can see it so clearly and that makes it so enjoyable to read. Good work, this was great and I felt like I was there. Keep writing, always and forever.

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