Me again, this time the right poem! LOL

The sea is a beautiful force of nature and one we cannot imagine would ever disappear. You could say it is reliable, which is a comfort when life id far from that!

You have described he sunset in such vivid detail that the reader, me can relate to poems purpose. The sea is within us, in our minds. We can call on it's majesty by searching the beauty within!

A good write.

Michael

p.s sorry i am new to the club, so I have much to learn.

Oh, I really loved this one. You painted the picture perfectly. The spiritless waves was my favorite line. That was just beautifully written. Very poetic work. :D Five out of five.

The imagery in this poem is absolutely fantastic. I felt like I was right there with you while reading. I especially enjoyed the third stanza, and the last, to me they envisioned the most imagery for me. Overall the rest of poem is absolutely fine. Great work!

Now this is what i call a colourfull view in the poem. I`m not such a good critic but i can tell when i see something good. keep up the good work

Ok i'm going to go back on my word right now

i can not rate your poem

not because it is because it's bad
but because your ocean views are putting
me to sleep I can not make myself get past the first line.

I have never truely been good with nature poems and for that I am most sorry
I hope that you will be able to forgive me

Beautiful and creative. I really enjoy reading poems that create a picture so vividly. thank you for the beautiful read. 5/5

-Liz-

Wow. This is, once again, beautifully written. I love the way you use words. You always manage to amaze me with the way you write. I've never been able to write a poem about nature, because I don't feel as though I can describe things to the magnitude that true poets can.

"Crimson, indigo, and violet fuse and collate within the stars
To exhibit the ocean's view."

^^ This is a stunning picture. With these two lines, I can see so much.

Wonderfully written.

5/5

``Briana

"The sun descends slowly beneath the clouds,
As a diversity of colors loom.
Crimson, indigo, and violet fuse and collate within the stars
To exhibit the ocean's view."

^Wow, I love the imagery you have depicted here, I can see it so clearly and that makes it so enjoyable to read. Good work, this was great and I felt like I was there. Keep writing, always and forever.

Thought i would read one of your first, not bad at all, one or two mistakes to my mind, but otherwise a pleasant poem and a nice read.

Grant

Very nice write Temps, I can see how you've evolved as a writter. This was good, but not as good as your latest works. I always like to read one of the first writes of a poet, goes to show how much they've learn through their time writing. Well done, keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Once again another nicely written poem. The wording was great and painted a picture in my mind. The flow was great from beginning to end. It was also a good length and was easy to understand.

I gave it a 5/5

Aaahhhh.... I just wanna start from the beginning.... Lol,you started amazing...and got even more amazing..I was expecting..I'm like...mehhh certainly she too started somewhere between dreams and fears...bla bla... but I was Wrong... omg omg... <3

the ending,that ending temps!! sheesh