This was cute and very true. Sometimes I feel bad for people who have it rough. I liked it! [5/5]

~Kail :)

I loved this. It was written so beautifully. It's sad, because it is so true. Those who've done nothing wrong, still get rained on, and never get to enjoy life. No matter how hard they try, it never works out. Personally, I find this really inspiring. At the end, you say that things will change for the better, and I loved that as well. It's a wonderful piece. 5/5

-Briana

A good positive poem for someone who needs reinforcement. Great job, 5/5