Screw it all

by she   May 18, 2008


Screw everything,
I'm tired of it all

Screw everything
The crying
The bleeding
Screw it all

Screw everything,
Everyone
Including me

I'll give you the gun
It's loaded with a bullet
All you have to do is PLEASE just kill me

[don't really wan't to die]

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  • 16 years ago

    by eehcuhhhz

    There were a lot of repetition on this poem.

    I get that you wanted to write Screw Everything.

    But it gets annoying after you keep hearing it.

    Find synonyms.

    I agree.
    We only have one life.
    Why waste it?

  • 16 years ago

    by aknives sweet kiss

    Very well written I would just to the ''All you have to do is PLEASE just kill me '' is:
    All you have to do is pull the trigger
    PLEASE just kill me
    or
    All you have to do is just kill me PLEASE

    other then that awesome and just some suggestions 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    This doesn't tell me.
    it doesn't.
    life's a gift.
    why would you throw that away?

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