by Cale May 19, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Everyday when i hear your voice it takes my breath away! |
by Lisa
Amazing work |
by halie
Awwww |
by Sarah Nicole
I love it its really beautifull |
This is a very sweet poem. As Maria said, I do think there is room for you to improve. I think some of your lines are way to wordy and you should go though and make sure everything flows easily. But other than that it was great. |
Me love it cale you know i do but here i am putting it in writing ......typing....lol 5/5,000000 lol well fine just 5/5 but it was great and i loved every word. |