Shes Amazing

by Cale   May 19, 2008


Everyday when i hear your voice it takes my breath away!
It leaves me speechless, trying to figure out what to say.

I love looking in those green eyes
The ones I hope I will never see cry!

I love it when you smile.
I always hope that it will stay a while.

How amazing you are always seems to be in my head!
I think about you from when I wake up till I go to bed.

Every time I think about you my heart skips a beat!
Without you I don't think i can be complete!

The distance between us might kill us.
But i feel having you is a must!

I sit and hope this will all turn out good.
And everything will work out like i knew it would!

I want to tell the world how i feel and shout it out!
Then the world will know that i have no doubt!

I think with you I have finally done right!
Us getting together is starting to look bright!

At night I listen to your voice mails over and over again.
I close my eyes and see your face and just try to pretend.

I haven't been this happy in so long!
Now i don't think anything could go wrong!

This is amazing, I think its all a dream.
There is no way this is what it seems!

I am truly the happiest guy ever.
I just hope it will last forever.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Amazing work
    it is a great piece,you have a great talent
    keep it up!
    God bless:)
    Lisa

  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Awwww
    5/5
    its so sweet
    :]
    i loved it
    it reminded me of my bf :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah Nicole

    I love it its really beautifull

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    This is a very sweet poem. As Maria said, I do think there is room for you to improve. I think some of your lines are way to wordy and you should go though and make sure everything flows easily. But other than that it was great.

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Me love it cale you know i do but here i am putting it in writing ......typing....lol 5/5,000000 lol well fine just 5/5 but it was great and i loved every word.

    you are a great writer.

    laura