Comments : Pretend

  • 16 years ago

    by Crippled Wing

    Another great poem...short but straight to the point. Keep up the great work!
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  • 15 years ago

    by AnCi

    Wooooooow!! This is amazing!

    I specially like this line:
    I'll walk away first,
    So no need to feel bad when I start to cry.

    &

    Sweetheart, I know when you lie.