Comments : My Heart Will Always Be Yours

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is pretty good, but I felt like you could add a lot more into it, and it really didn't caputre my attention that well. But otherwise what you have so far, I like.

    "How I can not tell you â??I love youâ?? to your face"

    First, get rid of that a?? thingy^.
    I hate when that happens! :)
    And a question mark is needed at the end.

    Keep writing, always and forever.....