Comments : A Fine Line

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Oh god....too many cutting poems lately..

    this is sad. but i really like the poem itself. the shortness of every line punctuates the emotion or lack thereof. good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Four Letter Lie

    Maya, u knw ily as a great frend. but this has 2 stop. u knw u can sop, bcuz i did. please dont do this agen

  • 16 years ago

    by Maya

    Hey...i can stop...i know i can
    hows the new school? very tall aren't you?! haha
    i have stopped though
    truly
    and
    forever