Scars will stay forever.

by XxfadingslowlyxX   May 19, 2008


Sometimes i feel so alone
even when I'm surrounded by people,
i feel like I'm drowning in a sea of loneliness.
and no one can understand, let alone pull me out.

I'm drenched in these sad thoughts,
trying my best to dry myself off
but every time I'm almost dry, i fall right back in again.
and nothing can save me from this stormy sea.

bleeding out, and i don't care
because at least the blood is a sign of life.
I'm surprised to see it drip out of these wounds,
because how can u bleed when your dead inside?

theres no one to talk to, and nowhere to turn
so instead i don't speak,
just write on my arm.
and these scars, they'll stay forever.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    Bec you said you weren't a good poet and your right you aren't a good poet. A good poet wouldn't have written that poem that way. A great poet would have. I read lots of poems, I don't leave comments on poems that don't touch me on an emotional level. And that poems up there with the best.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie

    I enjoyed reading this poem... good job 5/5 x