Comments : Carousel

  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    Simply a marvelous piece of writing. So much of emotions flowing through this simple poem.

    "The fainted answers & suggestions fade
    breeding a blistering tomorrow
    Burning memories & dreams we made
    the tainted sunlight comes again."

    ^^Amazing stanza that just stands out through the entire poem.

    Excellent work. 5/5