by Ash May 19, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Deception and treason, |
by Belle
I'm not sure if I understood the poem entirely; but what I did understand I much enjoyed. <3 |
Great peice of work when you get the chance i need to talk wonderful piece though mil/5 |
This poem is also very good. The flow is good but the wording could use a little work. I didn't like how the first stanza was the only stanza that rhymed. But all together it was a good poem |