Am i worth it

by jay   May 19, 2008


I sit here all alone and i dont know what is the cost of life and i dont know am i worth it
i cry and cry so bad my eyes are blood red so
like i asked am i worth.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jessicca Wiemken

    I wonder some times the same things

  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Mind Broken Soul

    You need a bit of work on this poem, a few more stanzas and some more amazing vocabulary could expand this poem into a wonderful work of art. If you expand it out more you could have some very good emotion, and I feel as though your not letting yourself say what you really wanna say. Please dont think I am being mean because I'm not I just wanna help you :]

    3/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Amazing job! i love this! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Andy

    It does need a bit of work,
    but you are getting there!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Ummm honestly it could use work alot of work i mean this could have a really good emotion and stuff but i cannot see it here. I dont want to be mean or sound mean cause that is just not me. But work on it a little more

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