Comments : A SINCERE EFFORT

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    And sincerely is how all poems should be written.A very pleasant encounter

  • 16 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Oh great poerty is evident here. the flow was fab and the descriptive language was excellent. =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Jim you are the deepest man I now. Your emotions run the full gamut of what you feel and think.

    Some tell of the lover I had
    And the love I want to give.
    Others tell of my lessons learned
    And how I want to live.

    You don't miss a beat with your flow and rhyme. I think you're a natural

  • 16 years ago

    by Invited

    Amazing poem- excellent work. You definitely have my vote! The flowof this poem was fantastic and you have obviously described very well what poetry is thought as.

    5/5

    Chinwe