Comments : I'll write this letter upon my skin

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    The second you think he hates you...you make him into a monster.
    he's a little boy, monique.
    he doesn't hate you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very well written poem, but I would rather comment on content .You should not beat yourself up about this unfortunate incident The shame should be that you had to witness this, and on the violent attackers.