Gone

by Megan   May 19, 2008


I love you so much,
i crave l your touch.
You left me so quickly and fast,
its starting to fade to the past.
I'll never forget you, i don't think i could,
but if i could, i don't think i would.
You used to hold me, so you should know
your my first love, just so you know.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    It's a short poem, and you expressed so much in the very few lines you have here. Capitolize your I's. That makes the poem neater & such. Other than that, you could make it longer to show soo much more. But, it's not exactly needed if you don't want to. Okay, i'll give you a 4.5/5. :]

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