Ten Thousand Kisses

by Bugg   May 19, 2008


You asked me last night if I loved you
I thought my emotions were plain to see!
I want to make sure you know
Just how much you truly mean to me:

If I only had one more day on Earth
I'd spend it with you, just holding on tight
I love you more with every breath I take
When I'm with you everything is right.

I love feeling your breath on my neck
Do you see this smile upon my face?
Did you know that you keep it there?
It's one I'll never be able to replace.

If I had ten thousand mouths, I'd
Kiss you with every single one
And if I had ten thousand arms, I'd
Hug you and start over when I got done.

**Sort of short and sweet in my opinion. I wanted it to be simple, yet get the point across.

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  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    So unbelieveably cute!
    loveddddd it!!!

    keep smiling:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    WOW I LOVED your last to Stanzas, the lines

    If I had ten thousand mouths, I'd
    Kiss you with every single one
    And if I had ten thousand arms, I'd
    Hug you and start over when I got done.

    They were great and original and the imagery was wonderful. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cale

    I like it! It was short but it really did get the point across!!! Good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Too many I's and forced rhyming. Doesn't flow well either. The intended message was sweet though.....

  • 16 years ago

    by FREEtoFLY

    Cute! 5/5
    I'm going to share this with my best friend who will share it with her boyfriend ;)

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