Comments : The Bow [a poem for myself]

  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    --My angles they'd caress me, in nights when I yearned for love
    But every time I found hope in them they simply floated above --
    i just loved that part
    long yes, but so catchy , and well written. that you just want it to continu on .
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by stillmomsgirl

    This is heart wrenching. I absolutely love the last line,

    "There is no point in living if you're looking for a heart"
    this is beautiful. You're an amazing writer. I hope you're okay. pm me any time hun. you know i'll be here and willing to talk. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYBXBE

    Did not stop to breathe nor notice the feel of falling rain
    All the pieces of my heart cutting through the chain
    Too long I've walked without looking back hoping just to see
    Someone who would find it in them to simply walk after me

    I ran and ran, my tired legs flying, I never wanted it to cease
    I ran past my frightened angels, over each little piece
    This time I ignored the cries and let it fall apart
    There is no point in living if you're looking for a heart

    Best lines of the whole thing my love!! I truely and deeply know how u feel and i relate big time to that! But you always have me! :] iloveyou<3