Innocent Childhood

Aww i realli like it
i like how its short but catchy and makes
us all think bak to a time when the only things that mattered was chocolate and butterflies.
i love it.
ur a great writer.
xx

I loved this. Your words used showed so much emotion, and it came out with every stanza you wrote. It was very deep, and that's what made it so great. Keep up the good work.

Awesome selection of words with great imagination. Powerful words to paint a beautiful scene, loved it.

Great write indeed

all the best and take care

Erm.
Is sans a word? Is it a word spelled correctly?
If it's both, it doesn't sound right with

Angels Sans Wings

I think second stanza was quite adorable.
I love Disney Movies.
And I'm glad you related it to them.

If you tried to make this rhyme.
You need a bit more work with it.
It seemed as though you did.
But I wasn't quite sure.
Some of them rhymed, and some just tried to rhyme.

All in all.
I couldn't really understand what you were trying to say.
Maybe you could make that more clear next time?

Amazing poem. The rhyming in this piece really did it for me. But I think you should carry it throughout the whole poem and not just the first stanza. Other than that it was awesome. Keep up the great work.