Pray for a good day i say

by Eric Velasquez   May 20, 2008


I wrote on account of my lost wife
i gave up so much
and in doing so changed
the outcome of my whole life
i followed her to a dead end
where she let me go and let me stray
and now its all over and shes gone away
and its come to a conclusion where all i have to say
is dear god i hope tomorrow is a good day

note: i no the title sucks you can thank derrick for that well you could if you knew derrick so i guess you cant well sorry for it

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  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow that was very sad, and i'm sorry for your loss. i know what is like to lose someone i just wroke up with my boyfriend of a year last wednesday and i just miss him so much. i hope it all works out for you though. Just keep your head up my friend and i know i'm only fifteen, but if you even need to talk to someone, i'm here.

    good job on the poem, but i think u have one mistake...u know where u wrote, "This i written on account of my lost wife."
    did u mean this i've written? i duno maybe not. lol.
    well good job anyway
    5/5

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