Wow that was very sad, and i'm sorry for your loss. i know what is like to lose someone i just wroke up with my boyfriend of a year last wednesday and i just miss him so much. i hope it all works out for you though. Just keep your head up my friend and i know i'm only fifteen, but if you even need to talk to someone, i'm here.

good job on the poem, but i think u have one mistake...u know where u wrote, "This i written on account of my lost wife."
did u mean this i've written? i duno maybe not. lol.
well good job anyway
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