You have beautiful poetry. I love it.
I love the detail, and the way you word them.
Incredible rhyme too.
-Peace

hey wow this was a amazing poem!! keep writing

Tyler, another wonderful poem!! I truly love your work! I could relate to this poem too!!! Wonderful job!!!
Luv,
Amy

Ah man!...That was a good one...Sounds familiour tho ;) haha Love you Ty:)