Does your razor speak these words too?

by she   May 20, 2008


Oh, you're so naive
are you really still trying to resist me?

you scream that you're stronger than my lure,
then why the hel* are you on your knees
c'mon I'm not stupid,
i can see you're so VERY weak'

little girl,
I'm not worried,
for it's only a matter of time till you come running back to me.

you hide me away,
as i laugh in your face,
for what's the point in hiding something you'll soon retrieve

don't tell me you're still trying to beat ME
oh, you're so naive
so pathetic
when will you learn
you will NEVER be stronger than my captives grip

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  • Wow this is real and so true!!! i know the feeling, but some times you can be stronger than the blade!!! Hope you've reached that day!!

    i LOVE it

    xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Ooo nice idea!
    really nicely written. the word choice, everything
    great poem !! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentSuicide

    Oh yes....my razor speaks words of that nature very cocky.

    very nice work
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    Omg this is basically what i go through too... wow. you nailed this one! great job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SeTtLe4sUiCiDe

    Amazing keep it up!!!