Comments : Does your razor speak these words too?

  • 16 years ago

    by tears in heaven

    Wow that was soooo meaningful.. i'm brooke i know how it is to hurt yourself i've cut and am trying to stop now. my parents just found out. i cant believe i'm not grounded yet. just hang in there your not the only person with problems, and saddness. read my profile youll know a lil bit more bout me.

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    I liked this poem, very powerful 5*5

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    This is a great poem. I like how you used it like the razor was talking. The flow and wording was good. The last stanza threw me off a little when it wasn't the same amount of lines as the others though.

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Razors lose their power, they get scared..and like people they begin to lie.

  • 16 years ago

    by Janalicious14

    Wow..
    how nice..
    I really like it..
    ahahaha..

  • 16 years ago

    by XxHiis BooxX

    AMAZING POEM
    Love it lots
    can wait to read more
    10/5 lol XD

  • 16 years ago

    by Nelle

    I can relate to this one alot. It doesn't rhyme, but it doesn't have to. It was good with or without the rhyming. I'm sure a lot of people here can relate to this. I know of at least 12 can. It was great. Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by SeTtLe4sUiCiDe

    Amazing keep it up!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    Omg this is basically what i go through too... wow. you nailed this one! great job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentSuicide

    Oh yes....my razor speaks words of that nature very cocky.

    very nice work
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Ooo nice idea!
    really nicely written. the word choice, everything
    great poem !! 5/5

  • Wow this is real and so true!!! i know the feeling, but some times you can be stronger than the blade!!! Hope you've reached that day!!

    i LOVE it

    xoxo