Wow that was soooo meaningful.. i'm brooke i know how it is to hurt yourself i've cut and am trying to stop now. my parents just found out. i cant believe i'm not grounded yet. just hang in there your not the only person with problems, and saddness. read my profile youll know a lil bit more bout me. |
I liked this poem, very powerful 5*5 |
This is a great poem. I like how you used it like the razor was talking. The flow and wording was good. The last stanza threw me off a little when it wasn't the same amount of lines as the others though. |
by StandStill
Razors lose their power, they get scared..and like people they begin to lie. |
Wow.. |
by XxHiis BooxX
AMAZING POEM |
by Nelle
I can relate to this one alot. It doesn't rhyme, but it doesn't have to. It was good with or without the rhyming. I'm sure a lot of people here can relate to this. I know of at least 12 can. It was great. Good job. |
Amazing keep it up!!! |
Omg this is basically what i go through too... wow. you nailed this one! great job! 5/5 |
Oh yes....my razor speaks words of that nature very cocky. |
by WaitAutumn
Ooo nice idea! |
Wow this is real and so true!!! i know the feeling, but some times you can be stronger than the blade!!! Hope you've reached that day!! |