Time of the Dove

by One Heck of a Blonde   May 20, 2008


Time is of but
a precious regard
in which the heart
cannot help but be barred.

To slack
is a slap in the face,
but rather instead
of winning the race.

You fall farther,
faster than before.
Can you not see,
or your friends what is to be bore?

You cry out, falling to your knees,
and instead of love
you find yourself
a long, lost dove.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    I love how you comapred it to a dove, very creative. i loved the flow and i liked how expressive you were. you put into it. wonderfully written. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • I like your structure in this and your use of words to comparing to the dove you did an excellent job on this 5/5