Her mother, 2 words, 1 meaning

I'm not crazy about the title, but then, all my poems have ordinary titles, shor t one word. The story is great- very emotionsal and easy to understand. The emotions flowing through your words are truely overwhelming and deep, you can really feel it. Also, the writing itself is just great.

kepp it up!

What a story, its realy sad and its hard to got this feeling speciall from your mom,but you write it in good way , i hope that you find something bring your soul back again and keep write,it help alot 5/5

This piece is overwhelmingly sad and the ending lines are simply heartbreaking.
Very emotional poem that can deeply touch the reader. You created nice flow from the beginning to the end, too.
I prefer more metaphorical poetry but I guess that we just have different writing styles. Nicely done, anyway.

I am sorry. I know how it feels. My dad and i used to be really close but he just started to resent me and ruined that pretty sweet innocent girl I used to be. Hold your head up you will overcome this. Great poem strong message

Unique title. Good poem. It was like a story. But, I'm not going to downrate ya for that. I write story like poems also. Although yours is probably more of a poem. Anyway! Loved the emotions in this also. And, this was sad..did you mean for it to be under the love & romance category? ... 5/5