As far as I know, God will not hate you, cause he doesn't hate any of his children, but he will class your affection for this girl a sin. Sins can be repented? I amn't sure... I'm a athiest.

Very strong, keep it up

5/5
~FountainsOfBlood

This is a pretty good poem all together. But the flow is off and you should add some stanzas, it's a little confusing without them.