Comments : A POETS HUMBLE PRAYER

  • 16 years ago

    by Alana

    I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM!!!

  • I really like the message you have here, it's so powerful and is so true. The way you express it is amazing. Thank you so much for sharing this. =)
    -Ally

  • Wow, just wow.. I think this whole piece is amazing. And we don't thanks the Lord enough for things he gives us, allows us to do. Nor the talents that we have. Instead of putting them on the shelf just to sit there and get dusty, we should be using them to lift him up. I especially loved these two stanzas,

    "I thank you and I praise you,
    For the many things you guide me to write.
    For they have much greater meaning ,
    Now that I walk in your light!

    Please continue to give me Knowledge and wisdom,
    So I may continue to grow.
    And as for the light you shine so bright,
    May I always let it show!
    "
    Once again, nice work, keep it up. 5/5
    -Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    This was just a delightful write. Even in all my trials I praise him everyday for I know only He can make me stronger to forge onward each day
    Very well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Jim,

    A beautiful prayer. I love religious poems:)
    thank you for sharing, I truly enjoyed this verse:)

    take care,

    5/5 Ingrid