Wow...
great poem, its really touching...

Little girl in the night, please oh please do not cry
there up in heaven, a better place now, little girl

this definitely shows the little girls' pain...
alone and cold wipe those tears, and look above, see
the stars
shine for you, little girl fear not for i am always with you, you have lost so much

this is really touching that last line, it shows ur concern for her...

today, i dont think that you'll ever be okay,
but little girl in the moon
please don't forget i'll always love you, so close your eyes and dream tonight, i know your afraid to walk into your life, to take that step away from me, the whole in your heart will never close, but
please remember that i love you so.....godbye my little girl.

This is really touching. it reminds me so much of my feelings for a special someone...

I like ur style.
keep writing and keep me up to date!

~Sophie~