Comments : The Storm and the Rose

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    "huge metaphor" is a major understatement. More like "gigantic metaphor"

    It seems more like a love poem to me, rather than a friendship poem. And I'm still trying to figure out what I got from it. I understand that the rose and the storm are two people. It kind of sounds like one is keeping a secret from another, or waiting for the truth to come out about something. I dunno, that's what I got from it.
    It's a great scenario, and was fantastic that you were able to hole the metaphor through the whole thing, instead of just bits and pieces. I guess every reader will take in something different from this.
    Hmm.... well, you keep me wondering, which is great!

    ~Lace

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Thiiiis is amazing. Of course as we all think, this should be under nature.. but your right, it's not necessarly like that. :] I`m glad you take time to point that out to readers. It could be misunderstood by some. Okay.. Do I need to go into further detail? This is amazing just like your other 198 poems. You keep improving day by day. 5/5. Keep up the awesome work!