Broken

by Mazie   May 20, 2008


You left me broken inside
You told me you loved me
And that you wanted me by your side
You gave up on me
You told me I was worthless
Why? What did I ever do to you?
I told you no is that it?
Your pathetic.
But why did I fall in love with you
Was it the hair?
Was it the face?
Was it the eyes?
No it was for you
I fell in love with you not what you look like
You pushed me away
I took the shove so many times
I guess I just wandered away from you
Just sort of fell out of the relationship with you
Who's broken now?
Well still me I guess
I'm empty inside
Nothings there besides a broken heart

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    This is a really good poem. I really am glad to have read it. I really appreciate the poem.

    I have read through this and thought a lot about it. I think we can all relate to a similar situation. I hope that you're over this. I can really relate to this poem.

    Keep up the good poems.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Ouch. that was some strong writing, you made me feel really sad. nice flow and i love the overall message. keep up the amazing work 6/5 ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    Really good!!!

    i love it!

    its amazing!!! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well done your poem was well written and presented.
    You ask a lot of questions about the demise of a relationship, i think you'll still learn to take the best of each failed one, learn something from it and move on

    Grant

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