Comments : Broken

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well done your poem was well written and presented.
    You ask a lot of questions about the demise of a relationship, i think you'll still learn to take the best of each failed one, learn something from it and move on

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    Really good!!!

    i love it!

    its amazing!!! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Ouch. that was some strong writing, you made me feel really sad. nice flow and i love the overall message. keep up the amazing work 6/5 ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    This is a really good poem. I really am glad to have read it. I really appreciate the poem.

    I have read through this and thought a lot about it. I think we can all relate to a similar situation. I hope that you're over this. I can really relate to this poem.

    Keep up the good poems.

    5/5