Comments : Stand My Ground

  • 16 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    Good poem!!!

    i can easily relate =]
    keep up the good work!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    Nice poem !! A really great poem.
    It flowed in a really nice way, and the idea and emotions behind it are all shown through every stanza and in every word.

    this is my favorite part :

    "Used to use you to hide
    but I will stand my ground
    Alone I stay to fight
    but my fear won't be found

    I will stand my ground
    when you leave me behind
    I can't give up now when
    there's happiness to find"

    Good job !!
    5/5