I hope she reads this, marisa.

Stuffing it with as much love as I possibly could,
And thinking if I could feel the pain for you I would,
Thinking that if you stayed here your life would not be so good,
Thinking that when I told you that I love you, you misunderstood,

I looooved this stanza^^^^^^ It was great.
This poem had me in tears. You have wonderful talent and a heart that's begging to write. Writing must come pretty easy to you with the right inspiration. Superb job keep it up. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

WoW, I didn't realize that it was that amazing until i read it out loud, and really I really can't pick one part as my favorite, really "she-devil" :))... this is one amazing poem

Wonderful poem, it had so much emotion. I'm very sorry to hear about your friendship. I've lost many of my close friends, too, and it's not easy. Great poem.

I love this poem - your rhymes are original, and the whole thing is so heartfelt . . very nice writing :)

Well, first off let me say your a wonderful friend for writing this. and this poem is very beautiful yet sad. i loved it either way! and i liked the way you made every line in every stanza rhyme. lovelly. keep it up! =]

OMG, this is really, really sad and brought tears to my eyes. 5/5, Em