Ps i loveyou

by Eric Velasquez   May 21, 2008


What i would do
to be together forever with you
to atone for my mistakes
and turn this all around
and make our hopes and dreams come true
i want you to know
where ever or paths take us
my heart will forever stay with you

ps i love you

sorry not the best rhyme schem but hey it got the job done

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  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    A very nice poem and who cares if it doesn't rhyme? it was still beautiful, i loved it.
    keep it up
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by tears of steal

    Your right not exactly the perfect rhym lol but who said all poems have to rhym it has good feeling in it i like

    *annak*

    ps. thanks for the comment on my poem. i just posted a new one called dream on. Check it out

    pss. im so sorry to hear about your divorce. if you need someone to talk to pm me. ill be glad to talk

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