Save me

by Eric Velasquez   May 21, 2008


I walk a path of shadow
striaght black and blue
going into darkness
with each passing day
i stray even farther from you
i pray to be saved
will you save me
will someone please save me
and open my blinds eyes so i can see
the eyes my tears are bleeding through
i cant help but feel broken
my heart is gone and i still miss you

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  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow that was beautifully written. i really liked it. i can tell you put your heart into this and i loved the emotions. keep it up

    my favorite part was
    will someone please save me
    and open my blinds eyes so i can see
    the eyes my tears are bleeding through
    i cant help but feel broken
    my heart is gone and i still miss you

    that last line is really great.
    ur a good poet my friend
    keep it up
    5/5 as always!

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