Wow that was beautifully written. i really liked it. i can tell you put your heart into this and i loved the emotions. keep it up

my favorite part was
will someone please save me
and open my blinds eyes so i can see
the eyes my tears are bleeding through
i cant help but feel broken
my heart is gone and i still miss you

that last line is really great.
ur a good poet my friend
keep it up
5/5 as always!