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by C May 21, 2008 category : Dark, fantasy / dark, horror
Stand up and see your fate, we all die by the bloodied hand. Crash into fire, eyes burned by hate. Give me your blood, dirty you up and go. Feeling shredded flesh, kill your polluted mind. The living tortured soul, living inside you spread all over. You cry forsure, but no one cries for you. Can't free you, Shatter the grips holding you. Escape your clouded mind, and unleash your wounds of waste. Everything that brings life, through away your determination. Youthful energy fled, sent away to watch joyfully. Your world burning, crusified the only one. Bleeding through the eyes, that watch the lies that come to be. Touching you with nothing new, believe the one you remember. When you thought you were alone, your curse is always with you.
by Aish
Amazing. Written very well (couple of grammatical and spelling errors) but i really enjoyed it! keep writing!!! 5/5