Fallen Angel (Acrostic)

Noticed the first letters of each line, nice touch. Great poem! C

"Eternity of sorrow her curse"

could have been 'An Eternity of her sorrow curse'

"Gone is the comfort of true love" ???

"Efforts are only in vain"
vain is spelt 'vein'

oh and the grammer is a little bit off in places btw

e for effort ;P!
^^^^
S for .... upid !
Must be cutting to many VEINS .... LOL

could have been 'An Eternity of her sorrow curse'
^^^
Hmmmm and perhaps Rachel you could of then changed your ACROSTIC POEM to
FALLAN ANGEL ... lmaoooooo
* Shakes head*

Rachel .... I think you have penned a wonderful acrostic poem. It brought tears to my eyes for I think the meaning behind your poem came directly from your heart.

Looking forward to your next
Luanne

Floating on the breeze
Appearance is only an illusion

This is an awesome starting, just the imagination of these words made me travel along, loved the complete poem.

all the best and take care

Nicely done acrostic...a very difficult form....congrats on placing in the contest Well done!

LOL Rachel,
You sure told him the truth, hehe!

I love your acrostic, it is not forced and reading it, it reminded me of Cindy somehow.
Congratulations on winning in the challenge!

Hugs,

Ingrid