Nice poem i think u added a few extra words here and there might want 2 fix those but goood job it said what u wanted it to say.

Wow hun i really liked that, it was like perfect and it meant a lot. you speak the truth when u say we dnt know when our time may come. very good write. keep it up hun.

this part really spoke to me:
life is to short
for things not to get said
there is no way to abort
but you to will be dead

Speak your mind
mean what you say
always be kind
you never know when its your day

great job
5/5

Sound like you are thinking alot of what if. seems like you have a problem, j/k. but it was an awsome write. keep it up.

Wow.
this is SOOO true.

and i loved it. 5/5.

great job && keep it up.

*all smiles*

mac.

Hey! I like this one. it does show us that life is way to short and we need to live it, not just watch it pass by. 5/5 keep up your great work! luv always.~~

Good message i think you wrote very well
liked it alot because, it's very true

Wow, really good poem! Semi-trucks are bad news. My boyfriend and I got hit by one when we were going to Memphis one day. He had to get 49 stitches (the truck hit his side). I loved the message in this poem. It was really powerful. 5/5

Really makes ya think about the future and things u wish u could say,should have said, or not said. nice meaning

Great poem. i really liked this one. lol. keep up the good work and keep in touch. lates. ^_^

Great poem. i really liked this one. lol. keep up the good work and keep in touch. lates. ^_^