Its lovely that there r more than 100 types of Existing poetic forms both Existing and created... |
Lovely, with remarkable imagery. I've never tried to write a Lantern before but you certainly inspired me to try. Your descriptions are captivating and very beautiful, I could picture the whole poem clearly in my thoughts which took me to a wonderful poetical journey. Excellently written poem. |
by Cindy
This is beautiful. This is a form I have never tried. You did a wonderful job. |
by Illusion
I liked it . |
by Ingrid
Very cute! I did not know this form, so thanks for sharing! |
by claire
I love the form it sounds so cool and seems natural (unlike some forms). plus i cant help liking any poem that uses "firefly" i mean what a brilliant little word! |
by bhaskaryya
Such a shame you can't center align it. Simple and effective but I don't understand how toy count firefly as 3 syllables. |