Secret Truth

by FaithHopeNLove   May 21, 2008


Your smile is like the morning sun,
your eyes are like the evening stars,
your touch is like the gentle breeze,
your words are like the calming sea.
All beautiful things
that were never meant for me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    You got soo much in such a small poem, the flow was smooth and use of adjectives elegant. also i can relate, all making this a 5* poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Aure

    I know exactly how you feel, when I tell someone about my feelings for this guy, they all burst out in laughing, saying it could never be true. Even though I keep dreaming of him and hoping he might notice me

  • 16 years ago

    by Becca

    That was so beautiful. I absolutely loved it. It was sad and sweet. Beautiful job. 5/5!

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