That was so beautiful. I absolutely loved it. It was sad and sweet. Beautiful job. 5/5!

I know exactly how you feel, when I tell someone about my feelings for this guy, they all burst out in laughing, saying it could never be true. Even though I keep dreaming of him and hoping he might notice me

You got soo much in such a small poem, the flow was smooth and use of adjectives elegant. also i can relate, all making this a 5* poem.