Comments : Childhood/Adolecent

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    I keep on dreaming that some day he's back again,
    with the drum roll sound that is never going to end,
    and I wish to see him - so he can call me his friend.
    => I wish you get your dream come true... even in your night dreams. :)

    I see Bonham made you quite a good impression, huh? It's cool there is someone who you really look up to...

    But I believe more every-day-life's-Bonhams than just artists I don't really know.. :) Every man in his own way. :)

    Nice poem! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    This is a nice little tercet, not quite so astounding, but still particularly good..not my favorite, but I can't say it's bad. Good job nonetheless :P !