Monotony

Really good poem
keep it up :)

Although it felt like some words were missing in places, I really like this poem. The language is brilliant (had to look up a few words though, haha) and I like the repitition of 'all are the same', found it really effective at getting your point across. I really got the point you were making, great work.

Is there anyone different? And little indifferent?
Holding other perception, learning different tune
Surviving this dent; brushing a new paint
Insusceptible by this infection, ardently immune.

I wonder that too...whether people different from this uniform wo rld are still there?...where is originality?? ....

take care..
wonderful poem...truly a beautiful message..touched my soul

Isha

I really like this poem. Especially how it all starts with all r the same. Really nice poem!!!

It is quite monotonous to have to see the same things day in and day out. I kind of related that there are so many people that are alike and it so difficult to find a genuine person now days. Fortunately there are some people that genuinely have hearts of gold.
Take Care,
Kay